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The Red Dog, 2025

James O'Brien

In Sausal Creek the water is black.

The light on its surface flickers

and is white but not wet.

From a tree the clicking

sound of a crow I can’t see.

Trickle of the water. Its sound.

I did not expect otherwise

but I document it for the future

so the future will know:

in the creek the water was black,

sunlight reflected white but

the light did not get wet;

crows in trees made sounds

like a rapid repeated clicking.

It was not the only sound they made.

Water at that time of year

trickled in the sense of its motion,

its volume and its sound, each.


Others walked the creek trail,

mostly in frightened unfriendliness.

Some had dogs and I told a man

I thought his dog was pretty,

a reddish colored hearty looking

friendly lab mix. Speaking to the man

was very hard for me. Not a thing

I had wanted to do but I’d felt

I ought as we were set

so closely to pass

on the narrow trail.

The man returned a blank stare

as I passed and spoke and wished

that he’d known how hard

it had been for me to engage

with him and his red dog

on the trail by the clicking crow,

the trickling water, the flickering light.

J O'Brien


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